Karvan Guzar Gaya Gubar Dekhte Rahe

I found these lines quite scary, and depressing:

Neend bhi khuli na thi
ke hai dhoop dhal gayee
Paon jab talak uthe
ye zindagi phisal gayee

I hadn’t even opened my eyes and the sun was already going down; by the time I took my first steps the life had slipped away. A great song, sad, but great.

Another great sample:

Haath the uthe ke zulph
chaand ki sawar doo
Honth the khule ke har
bahaar ko pukar doo
Dard tha diya gaya
ke har dukhi ko pyar do
Aur saans yun ke swarg
bhumi par utar do

The hands had risen as if to touch the moon’s tresses; the lips had parted as if to summon every spring on earth; I was given pain so that I could love the ones in pain; and what to say about the breath that wanted to call the heavens on earth.

Breaks my heart. I wish I could write something so beautiful.

0 thoughts on “Karvan Guzar Gaya Gubar Dekhte Rahe

  1. deepanjali

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  2. Madhuri

    The lines are good.

    Here’s something similar:
    Reyt se phisal jaate hai lamhe
    Aur lamhon ke saath zindagi
    Bas ek kadam ka faasla hai
    Use tey karte karte
    Gujar jaati hai zindagi

  3. Amrit Post author

    Hi Deepanjali.

    Thanks for your kind words, and sorry for the late response. I’ll checkout BlogAdda real soon.

  4. ANKUR TYAGI

    I LIKE THIS SONG AND THE LYRICS AS WELL SO I WANT TO PRAISE U SIR BY MY OWN WORDS ”UD RAHA THA NEEL GAGAN ME WOH,EK AZAD PANCHI KI TARAH EK TEER PAAS SE GUZAR GAYA REH GAYA THA NI STABDH WOH ,HAI KOUN WIDIT WOH PATA NAHI KOI DUSMAN MERA BANA NAHI SAYAD KISI KI TAMANNA HAI MERA ANT MAGAR ZANTA NAHI THA WOH PAKSHI SUKHANT ,TABHI EK AAWAZ AAYE YEH YUG HAI BHAKSHAK E PAKSHI KAR LE TALAASH JAGAH ACCHI WARNA TU BHI SIKAAR HA JAYEGA INKA AAHAAR HO JAYEGA, YAHAN BADA CHOTE KO KHATA HAI AUR APNI BHOOKH MITATA HAI KALYUG MAI YEH HAI CHALAN HUA HAI CHOUTA JO WAHI HAZAM HUA ,AAYEGA WOH PAL SNAH SNAH JAB BACHEGA NA KOI PACHEE PRANAH PHIR INSAAN INSAAN KO HI KHAYEGA BADA CHOTE KO AAHAAR BANAYEGA ,EK DIN PHIR WO BHI AAYEGA JAB KOI NAHI BACH PAYEGA SRISTHI KHUD PAR SHARMAYEGI JAB DUNIYA SUNYE HO JAYEGI ” KUCH LINE SHORT KAR DI HAI

  5. chaman

    these are the words that pour the essence of life to those who can feel and realize and take a turn in the void … unknown …., so that felt essence of life can be transcended to taste that which lies beyond the senses or means to such paltry experiences. These words are the window to take our sight away from the ground to the sky beyond.
    Thanxs for uploading all.

  6. SHWETANK MISHRA

    maine bhi socha tha
    kuch panktiyo ko naam doo
    rooh ki awaz se NEERAJ ko salam doo
    kalam jab talak uthi ki ungaliya phisal gayi
    waqt ki ye aag hai sahitya ko nigal gayi.

    NEERAJ IS THE GREAT