This is my first attempt at recording a song in my own voice and putting it on YouTube. I generally don’t like my voice and for a couple of weeks I had stopped practicing. Yesterday I felt like singing and after having sung a few songs I felt like recording them. Give me an opinion if you have one and be frank. I know there are some mistakes and my voice sounds a bit immature and "youngish" and I am trying to improve that and I think it is going to take another six to eight months. In the meantime I will be recording more songs and sharing them with people just to see how I am improving. The strengths in the song — according to my opinion are that I have sung this song with clarity, with good diction, with expressions and feelings. I will constantly try to improve. The lyrics of the song are: Chaundavi ka chaand ho, ya aftab ho, jo bhi ho tum khuda ki kassam, lajvab ho.